http://zenniezou.blogspot.com/?expref=next-blog
After reading this blog, I've come to the conclusion that this women is very dramatic. I came across the first paragraph titled "Devastation". I started reading it thinking it was going to be written about something intense, just to find out that it was about a broken nail. I feel like every entry she posted was about a stereotypical girl. Most of her paragraphs are BORING. This girl has about 3 posts ALL about how she is sick and she has nothing to write about, which is not interesting…seeing how she goes on and on about it. Some entries are fun to read but then theres something that ruins it. She is always talking about how much she drinks and how she is taking medication by the handful. Those posts do not make her sound very smart; its almost like she is begging for attention. Overall, I like the setup of the blogs and the colors she used. Her blog is very organized and easy to read.
First off this is a great critique, it seems like you analyzed her blog pretty well looking for strengths in her writing but ended up not finding any. These types of people never fail to impress me with their stupidity, clearly she's looking for attention and you can tell she overdramatizes the most insignificant things such as breaking a nail. If you have nothing to write about.. DON'T WRITE. Simple as that. Sorry lady, no one wants to hear about your sorrow stories and how you're drowning it out with drugs and alcohol while they're on their pursuit of happiness. I like how you give her credit where you can though (For being organized and easy to read). Overall i think this is a great blog critique, it kept me interested and managed to make me laugh a few times.
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